6 decades books

My first time writing a story.. Please be gentle.. If you could offer any improvement''''s I would greatly appreciate it, If you have any suggestions fire away I welcome all criticism.Synopsis:- Year 2029Follow our protagonist in a world created purely for one man''''s entertainment.Equilibrium Online a one of a kind, innovative VRMMORPG designed by Excel. This game is completely different to your click and slash kind of game as skill plays a large part of your survival.Then it happened...Millions goneVanished without a traceSent to a world they have no clue about.This is the story of a boy, Sent with no help to a female only continent. Follow Andrew as he explores the world of Aeria as his Avatar Gale the Sylph. Statistics Overall Score .star-3256-overall-498eeaba159f47c784a9d27f35559688:after{ width: 0% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 1,102 Average Views : 1,102 Followers : 8 Favorites : 2 Ratings : 0 Pages : 2 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author