This is the story of Zion Cray a 17 year old student that stood at the peak(of his school) watch as he goes to a new world called Aldona with magic, immortals, demons, and monsters. His mission is to make Aldona breakthrough to become a supreme world. Oh there are adventurers, a few sects, and some academies too.Yo first time writing a novel so if you have any recommendations please comment. Statistics Overall Score .star-7221-overall-afe54c5d17a141c0abae42bc6ec9ba89:after{ width: 100.9% } Style Score Story Score Grammar Score Character Score Total Views : 5,382 Average Views : 1,346 Followers : 35 Favorites : 4 Ratings : 3 Pages : 12 Advertisement Go to Table of Contents Mark as Not Interested Follow Favorite Read Later Fiction breaking rules? Report Advertisement Author