Honestly, I feel like rewriting the whole thing, but I am slothful right now. My college classes have started so the time I have no this fiction is minimum. Should I re-write or drop? If I re-write, I will improve the story line, grammar and make the chapter longer, but the updating time with be unstable. The time limit for the poll is one day.

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