"Any last words, 'Jin'?"
The name came out mocking. Dismissive. Like it wasn't even worth remembering.
Ryze's blade began its descent.
Jin watched it come. His body wouldn't move. His arms were too heavy, his legs unresponsive. Everything he lacked crystallized into this single moment where he could see death approaching and do nothing to stop it.
*So this is how it ends.*
The world slowed.
*A desert. Endless sand stretching toward a burning horizon.*
*Strong arms lifting him from the dunes. A man's face looking down with something like wonder.*
*"Where did you come from, little one?"*
*A training yard. Years later. Jin sitting alone on a bench while other children practiced around him. Laughing. Competing. Showing off the elemental qi they'd already manifested.*
*Jin pushed qi through his body the way he'd been taught. Waited for something to respond.*
*Nothing did.*
*Captain Hu crouching beside him. Voice gentle.*
*"Don't worry about the attribute, Jin. It will come in time. Some manifest later than others. Your cultivation is strong. The element will find you when you're ready."*
*Laughter echoing through the barracks. Royal Guards gathered around a table, cups raised high.*
*"To Jin Xiao! Youngest to ever join our ranks!"*
*"A true prodigy!"*
*"His future's brighter than the kingdom itself!"*
*Hands clapping his shoulders. Warmth and belonging.*
*The capital gates. Uncle Qiu's face as they separated, stern but carrying something softer underneath.*
*"Don't die out there, Jin."*
*The castle courtyard. His father's expression when Jin emerged from the smoke.*
*"Why did you come back?"*
*"Before all that, you are also my son. And it is a father's duty to protect their child."*
Darkness.
Jin floated in it. Weightless. Formless. The memories fading like embers dying in the wind.
*A prodigy?*
The thought echoed through the void.
*How laughable. What a joke.*
*I thought I was strong. Thought I was ready. But I was just a frog sitting at the bottom of a well, looking up at a tiny circle of sky and thinking I understood the world.*
*I can't protect anyone. Can't even protect myself. Father sent me away to keep me safe, and what did I do? Came running back to prove something. And now I'm going to die here. On my knees. In front of the man who's destroying everything I love.*
*What was the point of any of it?*
suddenly heat took over his mind.
Not the heat of battle or burning buildings. Something else. Something that seared against his chest like a brand being pressed through his robe.
The pendant.
It was vibrating. Pulsing. Growing hotter with each pulse until Jin thought it might burn straight through to his skin.
*What... what is this feeling?*
Something was moving inside him. He could feel it coursing through his meridians, flooding pathways that had been empty his entire life. Energy he'd never felt before, filling spaces he didn't know existed.
His eyes snapped open.
The world rushed back. Ryze's blade still falling, the courtyard still burning, but something was different now. Jin's body moved before his mind caught up.
He threw himself sideways.
His knees pushed off the stone, launching him into a desperate roll. Ryze's blade sliced through the space where his neck had been a heartbeat before, missing by less than a finger's width. Jin came up three paces away in a crouch, gasping.
And for just an instant, bright white sparks crackled across his body.
A flicker of pale light that danced along his arms and shoulders like static before a storm.
Then it was gone.
Jin stared at his hands. *What was that just now?*
The pendant had cooled against his chest. Whatever had coursed through him had vanished, leaving only the memory of its passage and a faint tingling in his meridians.
Across from him, Ryze had frozen mid-swing. His blade hung in the air, his expression shifting from confident to confused.
"What was that light just now?" He straightened slowly, eyes fixed on where the sparks had been. "Where did that speed come from?"
Jin had no answer. He tried to summon that feeling again, pushed his qi toward those pathways that had briefly come alive.
Nothing happened.
Across the courtyard, Hu Xiao saw it all.
He knelt where he'd fallen, greatsword planted in the stone to keep him upright. Blood still ran from the wound at his side. His muscles still spasmed from Tao's lightning.
But his son was alive. Jin had dodged. Somehow, impossibly, he'd dodged.
That was enough.
Hu pushed himself to his feet. The pain screamed through his body, but he ignored it. He took a single deep breath, filling his lungs completely.
"I guess I should stop playing around then. After all, my son is giving it his all to hold on." he took a deep breath.
He looked forward with determination in his eyes.
Then he made a choice.
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The qi inside him shifted. He reached past his normal reserves, past the carefully cultivated energy he'd spent decades refining, and grabbed something deeper. Something fundamental.
He pulled it into his qi circulation, let it merge with his flames. The effect was immediate.
Fire erupted around him.
Crimson qi exploded outward from his body, tinged with black at the edges where the heat was most intense. It wrapped around him in a thick mantle that was denser than normal qi enhancement, more concentrated, almost visible in the fading evening light. The flames didn't flicker or dance. They roared, coating every inch of him in burning power.
The temperature in the courtyard spiked. What had been the cool of early evening became oppressive heat in an instant. The dying sunlight was swallowed by the glow radiating from Hu's form, casting long shadows across the broken stone.
He raised his greatsword above his head, both hands gripping the hilt, the blade pointed toward the darkening sky. The same burning qi wrapped around the weapon, crimson light bleeding along its edge.
"I, Hu Xiao, Captain of the Royal Guard, defender of this kingdom!"
His voice carried across the courtyard like thunder.
"Even if it costs me my life, I will stop you here!"
Tao's eyes went wide. He took an involuntary step back, his professional composure cracking for the first time.
"You're burning your life essence as fuel." The words came out sharp. "You fool. The moment that runs out, your body will give in. You'll drop dead where you stand."
Hu said nothing. Just stood there, burning.
The eruption of flame caught Jin's attention immediately.
From where he'd rolled, he was facing directly toward the Martial Master battle. His father stood wreathed in fire, burning brighter than the setting sun. The qi radiating off him was visible, tangible, heat washing across the entire courtyard in waves.
"Father..."
Beside him, Ryze turned toward the light. His back to Jin now, his attention on the blazing figure across the courtyard.
"What?"
Jin saw his father. Saw the flames. Saw Ryze's exposed back.
*A chance!*
He launched himself forward. His legs screamed in protest, his body battered and exhausted, but he forced himself to move. Sword raised. Aimed at Ryze's unguarded side.
Ryze spun at the last moment, blade coming up.
"Impudent!"
Tao watched Hu Xiao burn.
The flame qi coating the captain's body carried a weight to it that normal cultivation couldn't produce. It was condensed, intense, the crimson light touched with that black edge that only came when something vital was being consumed.
But Tao was a Martial Master of House Valerian. He hadn't survived this long by backing down.
He raised his broadsword, lightning crackling along the blade.
"Very well, Hu Xiao!" His voice rose to match the intensity of the moment. "Let me see your resolve!"
He attacked.
Lightning coiled around his weapon as he closed the distance, moving with the speed his attribute afforded him.
His first strike came in fast, a thrust aimed at Hu's wounded side, using his natural quickness to find the gap before Hu could react.
Hu didn't try to match his speed.
Instead, he stepped forward into the attack and brought his greatsword down in a brutal overhead arc. The burning blade met Tao's thrust with overwhelming force.
The collision sent shockwaves rippling outward. But this time, Tao was the one who gave ground. The impact drove him back three steps, his arms absorbing force they weren't meant to handle.
Hu pressed forward immediately.
His fighting style was explosive, each movement carrying the full weight of his enhanced qi behind it. Where Tao darted and probed, Hu crashed and overwhelmed. His greatsword swept in from the side, trailing crimson fire.
Tao ducked under it, countered with a quick slash at Hu's legs.
Hu took the hit on his shin guard and kept coming. His blade reversed, came back around in a horizontal arc that forced Tao to leap backward.
They separated for a heartbeat.
Tao circled, using his speed to stay mobile. He couldn't match Hu's raw power anymore, so he stopped trying. Instead, he darted in and out, landing quick strikes and retreating before Hu could counter.
His lightning crackled with each hit, leaving small burns where it connected.
But Hu absorbed them all.
He pushed through the pain, through the lightning that made his muscles seize, and kept attacking.
Each swing of his greatsword carried more force than the last.
Each step forward drove Tao further back.
"Storm Serpent Pierce!"
Lightning condensed into a spear of crackling energy that shot toward Hu's chest. Hu brought his greatsword across in a sweeping block, flames detonating against lightning. The impact sent sparks cascading across the courtyard.
Hu came again immediately.
His greatsword carved a burning arc through the air. Tao twisted aside, felt the heat sear across his armor, and countered with a rising slash that Hu batted away like it was nothing.
The difference was clear now.
Tao tried to circle again, tried to use his speed to create distance. But Hu read the movement. He stepped into Tao's path and swung, the burning blade catching Tao across the shoulder before he could fully dodge.
The impact sent Tao staggering back four steps. His armor was scorched, the metal beneath glowing faintly from the heat. Blood seeped from where the edge had cut through.
But he stayed on his feet.
Tao reset his stance, breathing harder now. His eyes tracked the flames coating Hu's body, noting how the edges flickered and wavered.
"Your qi may have surged from 2nd layer to 3rd layer Martial Master, and is now above my own." He steadied his breathing, forcing calm into his voice. "However, how much longer can you maintain that form before you drop dead? I just need to outlast you for a bit longer, and victory will be mine."
Hu's grip tightened on his greatsword.
"Then it's about time we ended this."
He attacked.
The next exchange was brutal. Hu came in with everything, each strike aimed to kill. His greatsword moved in devastating arcs, trailing fire that lit up the darkening courtyard.
Tao met him speed for speed. His lightning flickered around his blade as he parried, dodged, and countered. He wasn't running, but he wasn't standing his ground either. He used every ounce of his speed advantage to weave between Hu's strikes, to extend the fight, to wait for the flames to die.
But Hu was relentless.
Strike after strike, he pushed forward. A horizontal slash that Tao barely ducked. A thrust that grazed his hip. An overhead blow that he caught on his blade, the impact driving him to one knee before he could roll away.
Tao tried to create distance. Hu closed it immediately.
Tao tried to counter. Hu powered through and kept attacking.
The lightning warrior was being overwhelmed. His parries grew slower. His dodges less clean. The accumulated damage was adding up.
Then Hu saw his opening.
Tao committed to a thrust, trying to catch Hu during a brief pause between swings. It was a good attack, fast and precise.
But Hu had been waiting for it.
He sidestepped the thrust and brought his greatsword around in a devastating horizontal slash. The burning blade caught Tao square across the chest.
The impact was massive.
Tao flew backward, crashing to the ground five paces away. He rolled once, twice, and came up on one knee. Blood poured from the wound across his chest, soaking through his armor. He coughed, and more blood came up, dark and thick.
But when he looked up, his eyes went wide.
Hu Xiao had fallen.
The captain knelt in the center of the courtyard, his greatsword planted in the stone to keep him from collapsing completely. His head hung forward, silver-streaked dark hair falling across his face in sweat-soaked strands. The burning qi that had wreathed him moments before was gone.
Completely gone.
His shoulders rose and fell with labored breathing, but he wasn't moving. Wasn't getting up.
Tao stared for a long moment. Then a sound escaped his bloody throat. Not quite a laugh. Something rawer.
"That was exhilarating." He pushed himself to his feet, swaying but standing. The wound across his chest screamed in protest. He ignored it. "But this is my win!"
He limped forward, broadsword dragging beside him. Each step sent fresh agony through his body, but he kept moving. The captain knelt there, motionless, defenseless.
Just a few more steps.
Tao stopped in front of him. Raised his sword, the blade still crackling faintly with residual lightning.
"To show my respect, I won't let you burn away." His voice carried genuine honor despite the circumstances. "I will finish you off here."
The blade began its descent.
Hu Xiao looked up.
Crimson fire exploded from his body.
The burning qi erupted around him like a second sunrise, so bright and sudden that Tao's swing faltered. In that moment of hesitation, Hu moved.
He released his greatsword.
Both hands shot forward, catching Tao's sword arm before the strike could land. He trapped the limb against his side, pinning it under his arm where Tao couldn't pull free.
Then he drove his forehead into Tao's face.
The headbutt connected with a crack that echoed across the courtyard. Tao's nose shattered. Blood sprayed. His grip on his broadsword went slack, the weapon clattering to the stone.
He staggered backward, freed from Hu's grip only because the captain released him. His hands went to his ruined face as he fell to one knee.
"You..." The words came out thick, distorted by blood and broken cartilage. "You deliberately stopped burning your life essence so you could stop my speed and catch me off guard."
By the time Tao looked up, Hu Xiao was already standing.
The greatsword was back in his hands. The burning qi wrapped around the blade once more, crimson flames roaring along its edge. He held the weapon high, both hands on the hilt, the blade angled for a horizontal cut.
"I will do whatever it takes to protect this kingdom."
The slash came faster than Tao could react.
Crimson fire traced an arc through the evening air, beautiful and terrible. The burning blade carved across Tao's midsection, cutting through armor, through flesh, through everything.
For a moment, Tao's expression held that look of realization. Almost respect.
Then he fell.
Hu Xiao stood over him, chest heaving. The flames around his body flickered once, twice, then died completely.
His greatsword slipped from his fingers, clanging against the broken stone.
He stumbled downwards.
His knees hit the ground first, then his body folded, settling into a kneeling position with his weight resting on his heels. His hands hung at his sides. His head bowed forward.
The courtyard fell silent.

