After careful thought, I’ve decided to rewrite the story from the beginning to elevate the pacing, character depth, and world building. This isn’t just editing—it’s a full overhaul to deliver the best version of Viktor and Kaavi’s journey.
?? What’s Changing?
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Sharper pacing: More tension before key moments (e.g., Ch1’s attack will now foreshadow danger).
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Deeper character arcs: Viktor will feel more active, and Kaavi’s powers will have clearer rules.
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Richer lore: Foreshadowing for the ‘dark-robed man’ and the northern kingdom.
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Stronger prose: More vivid action scenes and emotional beats (Artur’s last stand hits harder now!).
?? What Stays the Same?
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The core plot, major twists, and your favorite moments (yes, Kaavi’s bandit massacre stays brutal).
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Regular updates—I’ll post new chapters weekly as they’re polished.
?? Timeline:
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The rewrite begins next week (31 march).
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Existing chapters will be replaced gradually.
?? Your Input Matters!
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Want me to keep a specific scene/line? Comment below!
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Curious about a character’s backstory? Ask away—I might drop hints.
This rewrite is for you, the readers, so thank you for your patience. The new version will be worth the wait!
Stay tuned,- [TANK]